   Bright Green 2006-03-11 . chapter 1So pretty!I agree with the first reviewer; the imagery is wonderful. |
 Luthiena o Lorien 2006-03-05 . chapter 1Oh, this is very nice! |
 chaos called creation 2006-03-05 . chapter 1Good job in keeping the mood throughout the poem. LOVE the subject matter in this, because i'm a huge fan of stars :) Keep writing |
 panthera*tigris*sumatrae 2006-03-05 . chapter 1beautiful imagery. Keep writing! |
 Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-05 . chapter 1great poem. i love the first line 'i'm swallowing stars' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |
 Lavender341 2006-03-05 . chapter 1Beautiful imagery!! I love it!!
Keep writing! |
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