oo, its so sweet. i have a little sister and i love her with all my heart. i take care of her, when eveything is bad, u no? i love it.~Liz

I haven't reviewed a lot of your work so here's a review.

I thought the story was very sweet. It had very touching moments such as the description of the little sister and her actions when her older sister wants to run away. The last line tugged at me. Since while I may not have a younger sister, I do have three younger brothers, one of which will be just six when I leave for college.

I enjoyed the story, and I'm glad I read it.

Sweet...Goodbyes are always hard.. Beautiful write. I enjoyed it very much. Keep on writing.

I like this. It reminds me of my my older sister and when she left for college.