|Reviews for exchange|
| ossining 6/29/06 . chapter 1
I love the line "that spring will rise green and golden" because the use of color is awesome. The 2nd line of the poem also has some great alliteration. Great work. Keep writing! :)
| mizu no kokoro 3/23/06 . chapter 1
pretty imagery good work!
| chaos called creation 3/5/06 . chapter 1
soft and fantasy like.