eye catchin. great job sis.

warm...fuzzy...feelings?Youv'e really lost it now. ;)

That kid is being a turd LOL

For some reason the boy reminds me of Haylie(sp)Joel Osment in the movie A.I.

What. On earth. I read an author's note right after a cliffie saying the story is back in business when it hasn't been updated for months. I'm rather frustrated at the moment since I've enjoyed reading this story and would like to know what happens with Alexander.

Intricate, keep writing :) Reminds me a little of Matrix, albeit, not enough to really tell yet, lol..

wow. you've put a lot of twists in this. at first, I only thought it was going to be a short story, but you've put a lot of time and thought into it and are making it very, very good! I can't wait to see what'll happen to Alexander... augh, such suspense!

anyways. keep up the good... no... WONDERFUL work and hope to see more from you soon!

much love,
W4J

Disturbingly good... that's meant as a compliment :)

Omigosh.

That was truely and imaculately amazing.

Pray continue with this...

I'll definately be waiting!

-W4J

IDON"TWANTHIMTODIEIDON"TWANTHIMTODIEIDON"TWANTHIMTODIE!

*end of rant*

Oh SAD! I feel so bad for him...please say that he isn't going to die!

And I like how you have Jazmynn fighting with herself...like, she's trying to figure out which voice to listen to, the loud ones, or the little voice in the back of her mind...

...very good...I can't wait for the update on this! Keep up the good work!

W4J

Wow...Wow...Uh...Wow...

I can't believe how good this is. I sure do hope that the boy doesn't die. I like him. Anyways, keep up the wonderful work and updat soon!

God bless

W4J

Wow, this one would probably be my favorite one so far! Can't wait for the update...

W4J

Weird! I like it, but WEIRD! Heheh.

Wow that's really good! Very descriptive and I love the suspense you have created. If you are going to continue writing this story, it would be neat to know why this was happening and what lead to it... I hope you write more!