I'm not sure after reading your A/N, but it seems like this could just be a prequel, or maybe it's not... Will you be continuing it as a story? I really hope you do, the characters plead with you to keep reading. Good development in just two chapters.

Katrina's typing slave

(ps: You say Piper can't "drawl" Azelyn just right... Did you mean "draw"?)

Hi! I like the beginning of this! It looks really interesting! I think i'll read more!

~Tzotel