I like your style and the way you think. In fact, it sort of reminds me of some of my earlier stuff from last year. But you're more brief and to-the-point. That's probably why I really like it so much. Even the way you wrote your profile! [I like your quotes...] Haha. This poem was sort of ironically funny. The title won it over for me, though. The depth of every line...it's amazing.

And as for the apology, I didn't get out of it that you were mocking death or dead people; you were just pointing out some of the factors involved. So whoever thought that...they should have read the whole poem and taken into consideration what you probably meant.

Great job. I expect great things to come from you as a writer!!

how sadistic. part of me wants to laugh, the other part wants to say "now that's not very nice." i mean, usually poems about death are sad, this is a very unique little spin... very unique... good job.

lol. that was fantastic.

Hmm...and which Greenday song are you relating? Lol. It was intense, and very descriptive in a sense that it was spine-chilling. Good work, though.

Well, interesting! ^_^ Hehe, good work! Write on!

~Anna~

Very brutal.

I had thought that maybe s/he killed themself, but aparently they were murdered? I've never heard the Greenday song.

this is um... intresting! im not quite sure what to make of it, but it has some kind of grim truth about it. (ps. i love the shenanigans albulm :D)

haha green day sucks