reminds me of a certain someone. lol.

thats a good thing, when you relate to your readers.

*miss sp*

it's kind of got a bittersweet feeling. scratch "kind of". and you can really tell that you were writing from the heart. it's really good. nice job.

hey, u know, the line "you smiled at me" reminded me of someone who SMILES, and is also leaving. too bad he's dumb. tsk tsk.

Very nice. It doesn't have to rhyme. It flowed nicely, and I like how you didn't try to over-do the last line.