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| Autumnymph 2006-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseWoh O_o I've heard of this kind of torture. There was an experiment done on how long someone can tolerate silence. Students were paid by the hour, and their tolerance were observed. I wonder how deaf and blind people feel. |
| Jason Miller 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing. I loved the entire plot. Kinda disappointed in the end, but that's on my account, not yours. I was hoping for a longer read. And a little more difinitive ending. It leaves it open for more though, so that's a good thing. And the brainwash thing is a great idea, and a unique experiance (if you ever been through it, you'll know what I mean) lol. |
| IJS 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, thank you for reviewing my story 'Unmerited Justice'. There were a few grammatical errors but I won't really nitpick. This was a fun and interesting read, so good job. I think this would be something great to continue, BTW. Like maybe he finds the captor was lying and there really was several attempts to rescue him, he finds himself hesitating to obey the orders to kill the king, etc. Anyway, you should think it through. Keep up the good work. |
| Drizit 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuseSay, nice one. A very simple story with very good imagery. Well done! P/S: i DO know what i was thinking of in One Last March... except i wasn't thinking of writing it down that way so... |
| LancerDragoon 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseCreepy. Creepy as hell. I almost don't want to finish reading this. It's good, but it's, if you will excuse the word, ** scary. The execution of this story is not as flawless as the last one, but for all its imperfections, it's... it's... well, not enjoyable. And that's a compliment. Just one question: is this story part of the world you made? |
| Werewolf Nighteyes 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseNo, sorry. No chapter updates. It's a one-shot, after all. I MIGHT however write a follow up story of sorts. (shrugs) |
| darkdemonsunday 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Now I remember why you're one of my favorite authors!! (o_~) |
| la elfa 2006-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! hooking enough! are you planing to put on more chaps? it was very desperating i almos ran out of my office for more air! congrats, great writer! |