I have always admired your way of writing. The inner ability you have in expression still leaves me breathing breathless. You're my favorite artist

I love that last line & the hairspray thing

Favorite line: "I'd drink myself into oblivion again if you said you'd meet me there." Oh, that is so perfect and aching. Just love it. Keep writing! :)

I’ve hair sprayed my wild side behind my ears and the textbook

Almost

marks out my innocence as the lone teen angel

oh, beautiful, just beautiful. the first few lines completely capture that day after surrealness & the last line... such wonderfully desperate affectation

I get so many pictures from this...m... but I really love the image of the bus. Makes me think of runaways... nowhere to go..nothing to loose.

Brava.

ach, I love the last line.

Wow. Very nice. I like the discriptions.