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| broked hearted angel 2007-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseha ha thats funny dont worry I have stupid moments to! |
| InLoveWithCompany 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved every bit of this. From the vacuum to the actual explosion, I adore this. Great job, write on! |
| Rath Roiben Rye 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuserof that funny. i would laugh so hard if my shaving cream exploded on me. |
| Revinita 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis one made me laugh, and if that was not your intent- I apologize. |
| Blissful-eloquence 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I've had that happen to me. But it was at school, with the sample of Skintimate. My teachers weren't happy when they saw pink foam oozing out of my locker. I love this poem, content is great. |
| sorryshestolemystuff 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery entertaining. The broken sentences remind me of E. E. Cummings, who just happens to be one of my favourite poets. (Probably my favourite, if he didn't tie with Edmunde Spencer.) :D Nicely done...By the way, in your profile, it says you want to teach highschool English? I want to teach college English. I'm moving to Ohio this summer; I'll be going to Wright State. =b |
| Jason J. Ross 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseVery entertaining. Well done. |
| Matet 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abusehahahaa! that's so funny |
| St. Mock the Turtle 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I love it! The way you broke it up into a free-verse form made it even more amusing than it would have been had you jumbled it into one paragraph. |
| vampiric-happenings 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abusethat is funny! it shall make me laugh when i look at shaving cream ever again! thank u for that lovely poem! heheh- =) |
| rubberduckylove 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseNice... lol :) I like it! |
| Mint Dragon 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThat's really funny. I like the meter, too - the line breaks really fit. I'm sorry if that really happened, though...^_^-Mint |
| It Sounds Horrible 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is funny. Even funnier since it's true. The line "foam and fluff" made me burst out giggling. I think "hand-held vacuum" should have stayed with "handy dandy". But that is simply my own humble little thought. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the voice in this. Well presented scene. Funny in a way. |
| kt in the sky 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHa! thats crazy! I love how you mentions the shaving cream was pink, =P. a vaccum eh? not a good idea. something I would probably do!! but still not a good idea. |