Very Beautiful! or in Dutch: 'héél mooi' :) I'm Belgian so I actually understand it and it's really good and it has like depth...if you know what I mean ;)

Haven't got a clue what that all means but COOL! Kudos for writing a poem in Dutch...that is something I will never do!

Hey *waves*

I dont speak this language, but regardless of that fact i am envious that u can actually write and speak another language! Its amazing...im studying Japanese atm so maybe one day ill write a japanese poem, lol...neways keep ebing awesum and thanks 4 da review^_^

~Spirit-of-the-Flames~

hm ya a few language mistakes... I like it though but got no clue who and what it is about... i wonder.