|Reviews for vocal breakdown|
| simpleplan13 5/23/06 . chapter 7
I like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 5/20/06 . chapter 7
Wonderful write. Love this series.
| ADSpencer 5/9/06 . chapter 7
This collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job.
| oops heartbreak 5/9/06 . chapter 7
Incredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful.
| sunday night sky 5/3/06 . chapter 7
this made me want to cry. beautiful.
| astral boy 4/30/06 . chapter 6
oh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now.
| she's not breathing 4/30/06 . chapter 7
this collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work.
| Aquafied 4/30/06 . chapter 7
seems lonely and
maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel
| simpleplan13 4/7/06 . chapter 6
interesting.. i like the format
| mezzie 4/2/06 . chapter 6
i like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing.
| White Tea and Ginger 4/1/06 . chapter 6
love this, so simple with just the right amount of kick.
| poetic abortion 4/1/06 . chapter 6
the whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and -
jesus, it is so pretty.
| account not in use 4/1/06 . chapter 6
little flashes of love, life, heartbreak...
'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me.
| Aquafied 4/1/06 . chapter 6
seems very personalizedodd description
but i couldnt think of anything else
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 4/1/06 . chapter 6
I love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual.