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simpleplan13
2006-05-23
ch 7,
abuseI like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
2006-05-20
ch 7,
abuseWonderful write. Love this series.
ADSpencer
2006-05-09
ch 7,
abuseThis collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job.
oops, heartbreak
2006-05-09
ch 7,
abuseIncredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful.
sunday night sky
2006-05-03
ch 7,
abuse♥ this made me want to cry. beautiful.
astral boy
2006-04-30
ch 6,
abuseoh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now.
she's not breathing
2006-04-30
ch 7,
abusethis collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work.

~kait
Aquafied
2006-04-30
ch 7,
abuseseems lonely and

maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel
simpleplan13
2006-04-07
ch 6,
abuseinteresting.. i like the format
mezzie
2006-04-02
ch 6,
abusei like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing.

mezzie
White Tea and Ginger
2006-04-01
ch 6,
abuselove this, so simple with just the right amount of kick.
poetic abortion
2006-04-01
ch 6,
abusethe whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and -

jesus, it is so pretty.

~* noelle
account not in use
2006-04-01
ch 6,
abuselittle flashes of love, life, heartbreak...

'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me.
Aquafied
2006-04-01
ch 6,
abuseseems very personalizedodd description

but i couldnt think of anything else
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
2006-04-01
ch 6,
abuseI love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual. ^^
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