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| simpleplan13 2006-05-23 ch 7,  | abuseI like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 ch 7, | abuseWonderful write. Love this series. |
| ADSpencer 2006-05-09 ch 7, | abuseThis collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job. |
| oops, heartbreak 2006-05-09 ch 7, | abuseIncredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful. |
| sunday night sky 2006-05-03 ch 7, | abuse♥ this made me want to cry. beautiful. |
| astral boy 2006-04-30 ch 6, | abuseoh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now. |
| she's not breathing 2006-04-30 ch 7, | abusethis collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work. ~kait |
| Aquafied 2006-04-30 ch 7, | abuseseems lonely and maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-07 ch 6, | abuseinteresting.. i like the format |
| mezzie 2006-04-02 ch 6, | abusei like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing. mezzie |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-04-01 ch 6, | abuselove this, so simple with just the right amount of kick. |
| poetic abortion 2006-04-01 ch 6, | abusethe whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and - jesus, it is so pretty. ~* noelle |
| account not in use 2006-04-01 ch 6, | abuselittle flashes of love, life, heartbreak... 'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me. |
| Aquafied 2006-04-01 ch 6, | abuseseems very personalizedodd description but i couldnt think of anything else |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-04-01 ch 6, | abuseI love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual. ^^ |