I like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece

Wonderful write. Love this series.

This collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job.

Incredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful.

this made me want to cry. beautiful.

oh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now.

this collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work.

kait

seems lonely and

maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel

interesting.. i like the format

i like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing.

mezzie

love this, so simple with just the right amount of kick.

the whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and -

jesus, it is so pretty.

* noelle

little flashes of love, life, heartbreak...

'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me.

seems very personalizedodd description

but i couldnt think of anything else

I love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual.