 simpleplan13 2006-05-23 . chapter 7I like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 . chapter 7Wonderful write. Love this series. |
 ADSpencer 2006-05-09 . chapter 7This collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job. |
 oops, heartbreak 2006-05-09 . chapter 7Incredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful. |
 sunday night sky 2006-05-03 . chapter 7♥ this made me want to cry. beautiful. |
 astral boy 2006-04-30 . chapter 6oh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now. |
 she's not breathing 2006-04-30 . chapter 7this collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work.
~kait |
 Aquafied 2006-04-30 . chapter 7seems lonely and
maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel |
 simpleplan13 2006-04-07 . chapter 6interesting.. i like the format |
 mezzie 2006-04-02 . chapter 6i like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing.
mezzie |
 White Tea and Ginger 2006-04-01 . chapter 6love this, so simple with just the right amount of kick. |
 poetic abortion 2006-04-01 . chapter 6the whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and -
jesus, it is so pretty.
~* noelle |
 account not in use 2006-04-01 . chapter 6little flashes of love, life, heartbreak...
'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me. |
 Aquafied 2006-04-01 . chapter 6seems very personalizedodd description
but i couldnt think of anything else |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-04-01 . chapter 6I love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual. ^^ |