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simpleplan13 5/23/06 . chapter 7I like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece |
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 5/20/06 . chapter 7Wonderful write. Love this series. |
ADSpencer 5/9/06 . chapter 7This collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job. |
oops heartbreak 5/9/06 . chapter 7Incredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful. |
sunday night sky 5/3/06 . chapter 7this made me want to cry. beautiful. |
astral boy 4/30/06 . chapter 6oh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now. |
she's not breathing 4/30/06 . chapter 7this collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work. kait |
Aquafied 4/30/06 . chapter 7seems lonely and maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel |
simpleplan13 4/7/06 . chapter 6interesting.. i like the format |
mezzie 4/2/06 . chapter 6i like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing. mezzie |
White Tea and Ginger 4/1/06 . chapter 6love this, so simple with just the right amount of kick. |
poetic abortion 4/1/06 . chapter 6the whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and - jesus, it is so pretty. * noelle |
account not in use 4/1/06 . chapter 6little flashes of love, life, heartbreak... 'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me. |
Aquafied 4/1/06 . chapter 6seems very personalizedodd description but i couldnt think of anything else |
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 4/1/06 . chapter 6I love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual. |