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simpleplan13 2006-05-23 . chapter 7
I like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 . chapter 7
Wonderful write. Love this series.
ADSpencer 2006-05-09 . chapter 7
This collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job.
oops, heartbreak 2006-05-09 . chapter 7
Incredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful.
sunday night sky 2006-05-03 . chapter 7
♥ this made me want to cry. beautiful.
astral boy 2006-04-30 . chapter 6
oh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now.
she's not breathing 2006-04-30 . chapter 7
this collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work.

~kait
Aquafied 2006-04-30 . chapter 7
seems lonely and

maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel
simpleplan13 2006-04-07 . chapter 6
interesting.. i like the format
mezzie 2006-04-02 . chapter 6
i like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing.

mezzie
White Tea and Ginger 2006-04-01 . chapter 6
love this, so simple with just the right amount of kick.
poetic abortion 2006-04-01 . chapter 6
the whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and -

jesus, it is so pretty.

~* noelle
account not in use 2006-04-01 . chapter 6
little flashes of love, life, heartbreak...

'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me.
Aquafied 2006-04-01 . chapter 6
seems very personalizedodd description

but i couldnt think of anything else
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-04-01 . chapter 6
I love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual. ^^
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