I loved both of the cliche stories and two ideas put out there maybe: write story of continued life after hawk and morgan are out of highschool and in college then getting married and having the kids

or more on nate and libby and alex and natalies relationships maybe having kids and getting married

EEp! that was bloody fantastic. I personally LOVE Jed and Evelyn. Adult Liam was amusing. Poor guy. What ever happened to Blaise? Poor guy. And I loveloveloved Alex. Brits are pretty much the **, eh? *wink wink*
I would totally like to see Natalie go to England and meet the Mercers. Good money play is always fun. They should all take a field trip! But then again, I would also enjoy seeing more of interstate. Grandchild named for Morgan would be adorable from Alex and Nat. And Libby should get a french maid outfit. teehee. that would be fun.
Great story. You rock.

I LOVE ALEX! and of course Morgan's and Hawk's sons would be a rascal and a gentleman. I'm already entertained.

Oh deary me. This is fabulous isn't it? A sequel. I'm so lucky! and it promises to be just as complicated and amusing as the first one!

I hope that this isn't in extremely poor taste, to submit a comment without reviewing the actual story, so I'm sorry if I offend. D:

The point is, I just noticed that you wanted opinions on whether or not to repost "My Life as a Walking Cliche", and I'd love to see that story again. Obviously, if you're still really hoping to get it published, I wouldn't want to make you put your story back up - but I'm one reader who misses it.

Hey there!
I gotta say,I love your story!
Please re-post My Life As A Walking Cliche as I've not read it yet.
Keep up the good work!

That was a fun read! Excellent!

good story.

Your welcome!! I know I am amazing!! :) I have an idea for your next story! You should have three brothers and two half sisters. Then throw in a gay guy and a girlfriend! What do you think! . . . Oh that's right you already started it! :) I can't wait! It shall be fun! You are amazing! You are the Brilliant Brooke!! ;) May you go far and not get a head that is bigger than the earth or you may fall off of it! That would be a sad day! :'( Love ya!

Did I mention that I love Morgan! She makes me happy! Jed being threatened by everyone, beautiful, I agree!! :) Aww Nate is so adorable! And Morgan is gettin old! Oh to think about her having grandchildren makes me laugh. She would make one cool grandmother! :) Jed having kids is a scary thought! Oh dear all the world need is little Jed Jrs. All those poor girls!! ;) Yes indeed, Morgan taught them well! Now I'm all sad their story is over!! :'(

Oh how I missed Libby in my life! I love her! I am pretty sure she is my favorite! That was funny that Hawl answered the phone and that he was willing to threaten Jed. Poor Jed! Aww Nate is cute! I love Libby's response about striking fear in boys! I love that girl! Heart! I can't wait for her and Jed to meet! That should be fun! :) I'd love to see someone smack Jed around a bit, knock some sence into him!! :)"Muscle action . . . very sexy!" I agree! I love how Alex is always giving Jed looks! It makes me laugh! The brothers are very similar in how they thank Nat for the cookies by saying I love you!! teehee Poor Alex! :) Glorious meetings! I love Libby! I think she may be able to put Jed in his place! Jed made me laugh when he entered the kitchen. I love Libby's respnse to Jed's comment about being sexy and losing! I think the prize for winning is awesome! Too bad I could read how Alex beat up Jed. I was a little disappointed that Morgan and Hawk wasn't in this scene! :( That's right, you do have issues! :) Heart! :)

It sure will be interesting! :)teehee Daddy's warning Jed!! Oh Jed makes me giggle! Heart!

Well, I'm all alone and can't sleep, so I thought hey I'll read your book! International spy! I definitly like!! I would love to see Jeb sneaking around. Eventhough he is a jerk he's cute about it, which makes him less of a jerk then other players that I have read/watched. And there caught! Totally saw that coming!! I heart Professor Ryan!! :)Jeb is ridiculous!! I love him! ;) "Playboy tendencies" teehee! I like the idea of locking Jeb in his room. That would be funny cause I know he wouldn't stay there! :) This dinner is going to be interesting! Aw poor Jeb and Evelyn! :( I wonder what Jeb will be like when he grows up . . . if he ever does! :) Another amazing chapter!

I think the internet just stold my review! How evil of it! Any way!! I loved Colton!! He made me laugh, so did Gwen. Nate and Libby are adorable together! I loved the last scene! :) Now I'm off to take a shower and then Hot chocolate while I read the rest of your book! Oh, how sad! :'(

Yeah, so she really did marry Alex!! :)Oh what fun! Alex is so . . . I don't know what word I'm looking for! But whatever it is he is!! :) I love that man!! teehee Alex is so bad! tehe I loved Nat's response! Marital strife, that could be bad! Hm, I wonder what Nat's gonna do when she finds out! Now you're talking about brownies. More chocolate! Man, you're really making me hungry! Where is that Hot Chocolate? Oh that's right still in the packet! I guess after the next chapter I'll take a break! :) Oh no, oh no! teehee Nat figured it out! teehee teehee! Hm, now what will she do!! Dun dududun! (this is me laughing silently so not to wake the 'rents, which is a new way to say parents as I have learned from a recent good book) That was so funny. Alex is too adorable for his own good! Nat was so cute too! Yes, you are awesome. And there you go again with chocolate. Will I survive the next chapter? . . .