Reviews for My Son, the Cliché Twin

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Mylime 2008-08-20 ch 28,	abuseI hope that this isn't in extremely poor taste, to submit a comment without reviewing the actual story, so I'm sorry if I offend. D: The point is, I just noticed that you wanted opinions on whether or not to repost "My Life as a Walking Cliche", and I'd love to see that story again. Obviously, if you're still really hoping to get it published, I wouldn't want to make you put your story back up - but I'm one reader who misses it.
stillsearching 2008-08-12 ch 27,	abuseHey there! I gotta say,I love your story! Please re-post My Life As A Walking Cliche as I've not read it yet. Keep up the good work!
Raven Windspirit 2008-07-13 ch 18,	abuseThat was a fun read! Excellent!
ANGEL992210 2007-03-11 ch 27,	abusegood story.
Sara Mae 2007-02-20 ch 28, anon.	abuseYour welcome!! I know I am amazing!! :) I have an idea for your next story! You should have three brothers and two half sisters. Then throw in a gay guy and a girlfriend! What do you think! . . . Oh that's right you already started it! :) I can't wait! It shall be fun! You are amazing! You are the Brilliant Brooke!! ;) May you go far and not get a head that is bigger than the earth or you may fall off of it! That would be a sad day! :'( Love ya!
Sara Mae 2007-02-20 ch 27, anon.	abuseDid I mention that I love Morgan! She makes me happy! Jed being threatened by everyone, beautiful, I agree!! :) Aww Nate is so adorable! And Morgan is gettin old! Oh to think about her having grandchildren makes me laugh. She would make one cool grandmother! :) Jed having kids is a scary thought! Oh dear all the world need is little Jed Jrs. All those poor girls!! ;) Yes indeed, Morgan taught them well! Now I'm all sad their story is over!! :'(
Sara Mae 2007-02-20 ch 26, anon.	abuseOh how I missed Libby in my life! I love her! I am pretty sure she is my favorite! That was funny that Hawl answered the phone and that he was willing to threaten Jed. Poor Jed! Aww Nate is cute! I love Libby's response about striking fear in boys! I love that girl! Heart! I can't wait for her and Jed to meet! That should be fun! :) I'd love to see someone smack Jed around a bit, knock some sence into him!! :)"Muscle action . . . very sexy!" I agree! I love how Alex is always giving Jed looks! It makes me laugh! The brothers are very similar in how they thank Nat for the cookies by saying I love you!! teehee Poor Alex! :) Glorious meetings! I love Libby! I think she may be able to put Jed in his place! Jed made me laugh when he entered the kitchen. I love Libby's respnse to Jed's comment about being sexy and losing! I think the prize for winning is awesome! Too bad I could read how Alex beat up Jed. I was a little disappointed that Morgan and Hawk wasn't in this scene! :( That's right, you do have issues! :) Heart! :)
Sara Mae 2007-02-20 ch 25, anon.	abuseIt sure will be interesting! :)teehee Daddy's warning Jed!! Oh Jed makes me giggle! Heart!
Sara 2007-02-06 ch 24, anon.	abuseWell, I'm all alone and can't sleep, so I thought hey I'll read your book! International spy! I definitly like!! I would love to see Jeb sneaking around. Eventhough he is a jerk he's cute about it, which makes him less of a jerk then other players that I have read/watched. And there caught! Totally saw that coming!! I heart Professor Ryan!! :)Jeb is ridiculous!! I love him! ;) "Playboy tendencies" teehee! I like the idea of locking Jeb in his room. That would be funny cause I know he wouldn't stay there! :) This dinner is going to be interesting! Aw poor Jeb and Evelyn! :( I wonder what Jeb will be like when he grows up . . . if he ever does! :) Another amazing chapter!
Sara Mae 2007-01-02 ch 23, anon.	abuseI think the internet just stold my review! How evil of it! Any way!! I loved Colton!! He made me laugh, so did Gwen. Nate and Libby are adorable together! I loved the last scene! :) Now I'm off to take a shower and then Hot chocolate while I read the rest of your book! Oh, how sad! :'(
Sara Mae 2007-01-02 ch 22, anon.	abuseYeah, so she really did marry Alex!! :)Oh what fun! Alex is so . . . I don't know what word I'm looking for! But whatever it is he is!! :) I love that man!! teehee Alex is so bad! tehe I loved Nat's response! Marital strife, that could be bad! Hm, I wonder what Nat's gonna do when she finds out! Now you're talking about brownies. More chocolate! Man, you're really making me hungry! Where is that Hot Chocolate? Oh that's right still in the packet! I guess after the next chapter I'll take a break! :) Oh no, oh no! teehee Nat figured it out! teehee teehee! Hm, now what will she do!! Dun dududun! (this is me laughing silently so not to wake the 'rents, which is a new way to say parents as I have learned from a recent good book) That was so funny. Alex is too adorable for his own good! Nat was so cute too! Yes, you are awesome. And there you go again with chocolate. Will I survive the next chapter? . . .
Sara Mae 2007-01-02 ch 21, anon.	abuseAw poor adorable Nate! That is way too much complicated thinking for it to be morning! The poor guy! Aww cute Gwen has to come to work! Hm, this could be interesting! The fasting comment was funny! :) teehee It's not fair! Now I want a donut and I don't know where I could find one! (this is me pouting!) I could go out, but I really don't feel like it!! Hm I'm gonna see what I can find . . . Well I found no chocolate. The chocolate bandits came and stole it all. Well we do have chocolate cupcakes, but that involves cooking and I don't feel like cooking. I guess I'll settle with spice cake that takes like pumkin bread, not excatly chocolate. Wait, I could make Hot Chocolate. I think I shall, but first I must finish this chapter. See what trouble you cause! Anyways, the whole kicking part was cute! I liked Libby's comment about do you want to fight? Reminds me of someone else I know! :) teehee Nate and Libby's short make out scene was great! Those two are perfect and so cute! Heart!!
Sara Mae 2007-01-02 ch 20, anon.	abuseThis is too much fun to read! Alex is so bad!! I can't wait until Nat finds out that it's him!! teehee That would be weird if the marriage paper says that she's married to Nate! Very Weird! teehe they're stayign together, but I already knew that! :) Sharing showers, that could be fun!! ;) Alex is so so bad. I love him! teehee Those two are so funny and cute! I wonder what Alex is gonna do! How is he gonna arrange for Nate and the "Mystery Boy" gonna meet! I can't wait to find out!! :) I agree that Liam rocks. I could only image if Trent was the father! Oh yeah those kids would have been dead, no wait, they would probably live to regret it! :) I think you have way too much fun writing! And I have way too much fun reading what you write! :)
DisneYxPrincess 2006-12-30 ch 28, anon.	abuseAww, I'm heartbroken that Nate lost! But I absolutely adored the story (especially the Nate and Libby scenes...so adorable!). Jed reminds me of my old friend...the crazy womanizer you love to hang out with but would never want to date. And, of course, I loved the cliches!
XInSaNeXBlOoDyXPrInCeSs 2006-12-29 ch 14,	abuseHaha...Jed and Evelyn kind of bother me. But I'm conservative so I guess they're okay. I just hope he stays with her. Hye

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