   bright horizon splash 2006-03-10 . chapter 1Amen sister. Nice poem, I like how all the lines ryhme. |
 thursdays and rain 2006-03-09 . chapter 2oh.. the drama |
| thursdays and rain 2006-03-07 . chapter 1 can't wait for moreMOREmore.. hearts. |
 twistedFAerieTALes 2006-03-07 . chapter 1 nice. you really utilize the rhyming. overall, a really really good poem ^^ :) |
 admiresher 2006-03-07 . chapter 1great sense of loneliness.. nice poem. |
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