|Reviews for What We Deserve|
| Kesslyn Rosewood 3/12/06 . chapter 1
It flows nicely. Great poem.
| Benjamin - To Be Deleted 3/9/06 . chapter 1
I really like this. It's sweet, it rhymes perfectly [meaning your rhymes don't seem forced] and it' speaks from the heart.
''You deserve someone who wont judge,...''
You forgot the apostrophe in the word "won't."
| Needa S 3/8/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful ending. Excellent write.
| Jonathan Kimberley 3/7/06 . chapter 1
amazing poem dana. again you have written an amazing piece. i don't no how you do it. this is the probly the best poem i have ever read of fictionpress really well done. and well done for proving why you are one of my favourite poets yet again
| Darcy666 3/7/06 . chapter 1
This is a truly beautiful poem and i hope you get lots of positive reviews. Im not always emotional but this poem made me cry...