It flows nicely. Great poem.

I really like this. It's sweet, it rhymes perfectly [meaning your rhymes don't seem forced] and it' speaks from the heart.

One thing:

''You deserve someone who wont judge,...''

You forgot the apostrophe in the word "won't."

Beautiful ending. Excellent write.

amazing poem dana. again you have written an amazing piece. i don't no how you do it. this is the probly the best poem i have ever read of fictionpress really well done. and well done for proving why you are one of my favourite poets yet again

This is a truly beautiful poem and i hope you get lots of positive reviews. Im not always emotional but this poem made me cry...