Wow, nice descriptions you've got there. Thanks for reviewing my poem in German. Try reading my stories when you've got some time.

this is just about as perfect as anything you've ever done. not a word wasted anywhere.."it could be summarized in a pupil"...wow. i'm jealous! but very happy that i get to read you

It's so smooth and perfect. I love it.

Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig

Wonderful. I especially liked the repetition of the word see.