|Reviews for a slap in the eye|
| Leo Eigenmann 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Wow, nice descriptions you've got there. Thanks for reviewing my poem in German. Try reading my stories when you've got some time.
| emsworth 3/25/06 . chapter 1
this is just about as perfect as anything you've ever done. not a word wasted anywhere.."it could be summarized in a pupil"...wow. i'm jealous! but very happy that i get to read you
| Neverlander12 3/16/06 . chapter 1
It's so smooth and perfect. I love it.
| Alessandra Lee 3/10/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I especially liked the repetition of the word see.