Two words describe this very well: beautiful, and haunting. I too have been under tiger eyes, and could feel the strength in this poem. Great job.

And what of my eyes, staring at you now? Close your eyes, and if you concentrate, you'll see them. Feel them. Hear them even. They're watching...

love it, very passionate and a lot of depth to this, i love the last line, i think thats how i long to feel! Well done this is great!