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| Eve O'et 2007-10-12 ch 8,   | WHAT?!hahaha...amazing!i loved that story!so unique,so cute and so practical!Loved it!:) |
| Cel M. 2007-03-31 ch 8, | I liked this. =] |
| merrymowmow 2006-12-10 ch 8, | I was wondering when you're going to update. |
| Westbound Hill 2006-10-30 ch 8, | I'm Going To Pretend I Didnt See That You Said Travis Instead Of Patrick And Go On To Say How Completely Amazing That Story Was.! |
| Free Fallin' Girl 2006-10-29 ch 7, | Hey, i just read ur whole story and i really like it. It seems alil predictable but i have a feeling u are going to trick and suprise us. Even if it does end the way i see it ending it will still be a good story so update soon! |
| Lady-of-Aquitaine 2006-10-29 ch 1, | This story's really good...I just think you should make the conversations a bit longer and make the Mickey character...you know more like we know her... |
| authordream4life 2006-10-28 ch 7, | I'm still here! Don't worry!! I really liked this. I think it could have been a wee bit longer, but other than that, it was fabulous! Please write more soon! -Sas |
| Westbound Hill 2006-08-16 ch 6, | This Is An Amazing Story.Its Great How You Put Real Emotion Into All Of This.Looking Forward To Chapter 7.! |
| Carina 2006-07-31 ch 6, | Aww this is a good story. I hope you write more soon. The chars are well developed it seems like and it's nice to read a story with good grammar and spelling. |
| authordream4life 2006-05-21 ch 6, | Woah, you have GOT to keep writing this! I'm officially addicted! Please keep going!! Please, PLEASE, PLEASE!! |
| Fallen Roze 2006-05-14 ch 6, | aw yay! there starting to like each other! can't wait for the next chaptor! I've been gone for like a month cuz I had to move...so I'm just now catching up...~Roze |
| carina0615 2006-03-21 ch 4, | I really like it, very interesting and mysterious...can't wait to find out what's going to happen between them |
| Far.abi 2006-03-21 ch 4, | good story but it needs a little more explaining in accordance with the lengthy dialogue. ~foze |
| Fallen Roze 2006-03-21 ch 4, | hm...it seems that he likes her! I love how this is going and everything! ~Roze |
| Fallen Roze 2006-03-19 ch 3, | I like this story, it's pretty cute so far, how coem he's driving her home still? I thought he didn't do that if he had a g/f! anyway can't wait for the update!~Roze |