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| YoursMarilyn 2008-06-04 ch 24,  | abuseI love the layout of this story. It's really interesting and I love Johnny and Mary's character. are you going to update soon? |
| anonymous 2007-04-12 ch 18, anon. | abusei like your story but please don't bash broken social scene |
| akaSummer 2006-12-07 ch 24, | abuseAh! This story is developing so well! I have to admit, I was skeptical at first, but I'm addicted. I've spent more than one night up WAY past my bedtime, trying to get caught up to your posts. So, all I have to say is, write quick! |
| RedBerries 2006-11-18 ch 24, | abuseThree chapter alerts in my inbox all from the same story! I think you made my year! |
| simple-teen 2006-11-16 ch 24, | abuseI LOVE IT! I'd seriously make that bigger if I could. Especially the last chapter, it was just so sweet. |
| Typesour 2006-11-15 ch 24, | abuseI'm still a little unsure of Johnny's intentions, but at least now it's obvious he doesn't want to play around with her. Maybe it's about helping her, honestly, or maybe it's about rescuing himself. But I love the grey areas of this story. There's never too much detail or too much of an explanation - we're left to actually think for ourselves. It's about deciphering everything they say and do, about trying to get even more inside their heads. It's fun. I feel for the characters and that's something the authors can't force, just kind of let it happen through their abilities. Anyways, still really loving this story - more and more every chapter even. Hope you update soon. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-14 ch 24, | abusedownhill and spiraling. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-14 ch 23, | abusewhat if's are always doubtful i hate johnny. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-14 ch 22, | abuseohh, you and your ties dundundun. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-14 ch 21, | abusesomesome some i like this more and more. hah |
| Aquafied 2006-11-14 ch 20, | abuseah ha ha ha. mean. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-14 ch 18, | abuseawaw cute in an interesting kind of way |
| Trmpetplaya1 2006-11-14 ch 24, | abuseInteresting story. I like how you're telling it, with the rotating perspectives and all. Can't wait to read more :) |
| Mia 2006-11-13 ch 23, anon. | abuseOh I get it, there was a chapter missing last time, right? Yes, well, it's better this way :) I liked that last chapter a lot, lol. Take care! |
| Mia 2006-11-13 ch 22, anon. | abuseOh my good that is too sweet! I don't know, they're *fighting* over her! And poor girl :-( ow...but omg that's so adorable somehow! Lol, going to read more! |