i loved it alot plz keep writing i cant wait 2 read wat happens with mary and johnny

I love the layout of this story. It's really interesting and I love Johnny and Mary's character. are you going to update soon?

i like your story but please don't bash broken social scene

Ah! This story is developing so well! I have to admit, I was skeptical at first, but I'm addicted. I've spent more than one night up WAY past my bedtime, trying to get caught up to your posts. So, all I have to say is, write quick!

Three chapter alerts in my inbox all from the same story! I think you made my year!

I LOVE IT! I'd seriously make that bigger if I could. Especially the last chapter, it was just so sweet.

I'm still a little unsure of Johnny's intentions, but at least now it's obvious he doesn't want to play around with her. Maybe it's about helping her, honestly, or maybe it's about rescuing himself.

But I love the grey areas of this story. There's never too much detail or too much of an explanation - we're left to actually think for ourselves. It's about deciphering everything they say and do, about trying to get even more inside their heads. It's fun. I feel for the characters and that's something the authors can't force, just kind of let it happen through their abilities. Anyways, still really loving this story - more and more every chapter even. Hope you update soon.

downhill and spiraling.

what if's are always doubtful
i hate johnny.

ohh, you and your ties
dundundun.

somesome some


i like this more and more.
hah

ah ha ha ha.
mean.

awaw
cute in an interesting kind of way

Interesting story. I like how you're telling it, with the rotating perspectives and all.

Can't wait to read more :)

Oh I get it, there was a chapter missing last time, right? Yes, well, it's better this way :) I liked that last chapter a lot, lol. Take care!