Very stark and tragically beautiful imagery. Excellent work.

idk... this poem reminds me of when you get to that crossroads in life and you seem to lose everything that you knew was dear to you...i dont know why it has to happen that way but i think you just entered my world...

I think this was very well written. You expressed much in this poem. I'm sure people can relate to the feeling of a friend lost.

Keep it up.

loved the last two lines, this was great.

so much bottled up emotions in this...great job

interesting~ i like the description~

keep writing!

Easy to imagine, and yet it manages to be layered. I'm intrigued. I am majorly intrigued.

Rei. I love your writings! :D

so sad.

i've always wanted to do that... stand in front of the train tracks and just watch the train go by.

teehee.