This is very beautiful. It seems kind of mysterious too, in ways, and that's what I love about this poem. It makes me think.

I love the idea of the stars being "half asleep." So delicate and stunning.


I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!

this makes me want to cry. its so tragically beautiful.

I especially love the line "the stars/still half asleep inside". Well-written! (:

this is so sad and sweet ...wow

oh my god megan i loved it so much, your ending is so beautiful and heartbreakin'... i love it, i wish i could still write like i used to... i love you megan and i havent forgotten about you, im just havin problems w/ the house and the computer usage...

i like this a lot. it's really cute. keep up the good work.

-kay-

p.s. thanks for the review!

Woow.. that was quite well-written.

oh wow. so amazing.

aww.. that was so sweet. hearts.

i love your new display name! and this poem is brilliantly written! the summary was really eyecatching -- "with the stars half asleep inside" amazing!

that was sweet! i liked the lines: "where i sent you away; to bring me back the moon.." and "i love you to the moon, and down again; around the world, and back again.." that was part of the poem too, right? it was lovely. good work. keep writing!

it's like i can see and feel the box. maybe it's just symbolic but the imagery is beautiful.

This is like all things mysterious.

wonderful as always!

love it rei.