very nice. I think t his could be a song. And yet again, the flow was great. Keep it up.

thanks for reviewing my work! i love this piece, very interesting...definitely a unique quality to your writing. i will have to keep tabs on you!

extremely powerful last lines. it really sums up this piece. i like it.

i love that line " our toes daring the cliff to crumble" when you just get that feeling that you're invincible...i have that feeling now and sometimes it scares me but idk why...

Just beautiful. The way that you write simply touches me, I cna relate to what you say so well and the imagry is so beautifully done.

Keep it up.

-screams- ah, i lost you for the longest time, and now i found you.this is so gorgeous, i missed reading your stuff.

GORGEOUS!! Rei, this has GOT to be one of your BEST works! i love so many lines in this poem. loving all the metaphors etc. so great, +faves!

=D Katt

heartwrenching. love the subject matter

i've been in that position...

so sad.

hell. i have actually cried over a guy before! xD but that's just random. :P

LOVE IT!