Honestly, this rocks. I don't know a lot about poetry or anything, but I like this. And I like the song that it's based on (is it?)
Yeah. it rocks.

Another great poem! This is great! And thanks for the reviews on my story: Two Different Worlds. It's greatly appreciated. I can't be perfect when it comes to putting certain kinds of foods into stories... I just put any kind of food I eat in the story. Which sounded so good at the time so, I wrote it down. If you would like me to change chapter two I will. Thanks for your input, ~Melissa~