Wow, this story's getting rather intense. I like the ending of the 3rd chapter a lot!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

pchka, suspence! plot! secrets! sneaking and peaking! exclamation abuse!

Wow! I like your story so far! It's real interesting. I especially like Davin so far. He sounds so hot! Keep writing and I can't wait for the next chapter!

ha, this is interesting. I'm a horse person, so I got kinda excited when I saw how much horse-ness there was=^_^= anyways, seems like you know what you're doing, so please, update soon!

Interesting story so far dude. That last part just made me go 'Awe!' lmao. PLEASE update as soon as you can. Write on.

- Celie