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Casey Drake 2006-11-14 . chapter 8
hahahaha.

XD CD
Mikki Amboree 2006-11-07 . chapter 8
Washing dishes with a hair dryer!? *shudders* I'm scared... @_@ Aw, why doesn't Muse Sune get any love? *huggles Muse* Gosh, send back here where he's loved. I know you have him locked in your basement! That's why I haven't been writing. Sheesh...
Heatless Flame 2006-11-07 . chapter 8
Wow. This was a totally crazy chapter, but what else is new in RandomMAN and Captain Person?
Casey Drake 2006-06-20 . chapter 7
*claps* *trades pepsi cups with heatless flame* here.

hahahahaha!

:) CD
Heatless Flame 2006-06-20 . chapter 7
I like Alexia but why did I get the empty pop? I hate Diet Pepsi anyway...
Mikki Amboree 2006-06-19 . chapter 7
FYI: I'm a smoking good dish washer. I'm known for ALWAYS wanting to wash the dishes at the end of the night. xD

I hate it when costumers come in with $100 bills. It makes me nervous. I'm like "Don't lose it... don't lose... gah... the AC is up so high... I'm going to... Here's your change!" *bright smile*

I laughed all the way through this. Oh man... this has got to be the funniest yet.

Am I going to have to take Muse away from you? I can do that... I'll get Lucas as my attorney! Why must the crazy future Mikki's job people love him so much? Oh that's right... he's the object of a state of deep thought.

*takes Alexia's pickle*

Yummeh!
Mikki Amboree 2006-06-14 . chapter 6
Heh, so if we're making millions... when do I get my paycheck?

I like the list of things they had to do in order to do whatever it was that they were doing.

Haha, my sister... er... I mean Mac & Cheese Girl is so evil! v__v Watching Disney Channel = automatic evilness! She can hurt you, but if you so much as lay a finger on her... she goes running to Daddy, er... I mean Mac & Cheese Man... yeah... that's it... *shifty eyes*

Sune! *runs after her precious Muse* I mean... co-worker... no... fave character. Gah, this secret identity business is hard. @_@!

I have to go to the Fortress of Evil in a few hours, but this definitely got me in a giggly mood. =P
Casey Drake 2006-06-13 . chapter 6
*dies laughing* the only thing about this that I DON'T like is that I'm not blonde, I'm brown-haired.

I AM THE FRIENDLY NEIGHBORHOOD WRITER-PERSON!! XDD

Oh, it's ME not story-me. SWEET! *is dancing at quarter-to-one AM*

Yes I am hyper.

XD CD
Heatless Flame 2006-06-13 . chapter 6
Yeah, I'm FEATURED! *Starts singing loudly about never giving up the key and how Visice will save him* "AND I WON"T GIVE THE KEY UP!"Clapping from nowhere.

Anyway. I like this chapter. Plenty of cool new characters!
thunderbolt and lightning 2006-06-13 . chapter 6
i wish i could have a cameo apperence but I'm not cool enough (that is my amazering plan to get you to put me in the story a pity party mwahahahaha) i love reading this story it is filled with random things that make no sence and it reminds me of well ME expecialy the randomness tah tah for now
Casey Drake 2006-06-11 . chapter 5
*cracks up*

GAH!!

XD CD
Casey Drake 2006-06-11 . chapter 4
... were the monks based on Spamalot by any possible chance?

*snerk* me loveth Phantom... btw... you have the lyrics wrong. ah well.

Do I show up at any point?

XD CD
WyrdWolf 2006-06-02 . chapter 5
Woot for randomness!

So she turned into a panda...how very...random. And disturbing. But mostly random!

Alexia, the ultimate sterotype! She's a good guy, right? Nacho Boy sounds like evil incarnate...does he fight with razor sharp nachos? I hope to find out soon!
Mikki Amboree 2006-05-31 . chapter 5
*falls over laughing*

The heck? *wonders if the real Alexia acts anything like that*

It seems as though she was flipping from student to director or something in that one part. Hee. Kitty Man... x3 Angsty goth is what killed me. No wait... I was already dead by then... Then you threw in that flower stuff! *my sides hurt*

"I'm not a deformed squirrel thing!"

*steals that line (with your permission of course)*
WyrdWolf 2006-05-14 . chapter 4
This makes absolutely no sense at all--and that's my favorite part!

'Random powers turn a tree to an apple-juice drinking turtle.' This just made me bust a gut; it was so random!

May Super Tourist guide them safely!
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