Wow, adulterous ** much?
Poor dude/girl, they don't even know that they're being cheated on.

very sweet- i like the subtle rhyming it adds an effect

really well done and neatly put together. packs a punch, certainly. And it's lovely and very much without purple prose, which is a good thing.

Wow... thats crazy good. Great job.

I love it. It's just so... well, it's just something you'd expect from you.

i like this. quite vague in a way, but a good way! i love the last line!