|Reviews for horizon|
| just dani 3/30/06 . chapter 1
i love your poems. most of them are so short and simple, but full of meaning...and still leaving room for imagination. You leave the reader still thinking...very lovely. keep writing
| XX Bleeding Crystal XX 3/13/06 . chapter 1
Lovely, simply lovely. You're simply marvelous with haikus. You find the exact words to portray the feelings I think we all have (hence so many reviews), and people can strongly can relate to this. Simple, but still full of meaning to everyone, with a different meaning to each one. Charming.
| Red Vision 3/10/06 . chapter 1
| Aquafied 3/9/06 . chapter 1
and fallpessimism lives on, we are all a little bit
more of quite a bit
| poetic abortion 3/9/06 . chapter 1
beautiful. "frayed skyline" is infectiously cute and beautiful, pretty.
| Infinity Plus One 3/9/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Thank you for the review BTw.
| Moondog Dozier 3/8/06 . chapter 1
Very visual in the abstraction. Good work.
| chaos called creation 3/8/06 . chapter 1
I like especially how you used 'frayed'in this.
| Ashes.to.Acid 3/8/06 . chapter 1
Short, but incredibly good as always. I feel a sense of freedom in this.
| White Tea and Ginger 3/8/06 . chapter 1
Deliciously sweet. Great mood here, so free and hopeful. I love the phrase 'frayed skyline'.
| MidnightStar005 3/8/06 . chapter 1
That is beautiful!
| run rabbit run 3/8/06 . chapter 1
short and sweet. nice
| crazy dog events 3/8/06 . chapter 1
It feels like there should be an 'and somewhere before 'fly.' it feels weird otherwise. Quite wonderful, other than that, though.
| Alison Wright 3/8/06 . chapter 1
Oh I am with you there. Short and sweet.