i love your poems. most of them are so short and simple, but full of meaning...and still leaving room for imagination. You leave the reader still thinking...very lovely. keep writing

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Lovely, simply lovely. You're simply marvelous with haikus. You find the exact words to portray the feelings I think we all have (hence so many reviews), and people can strongly can relate to this. Simple, but still full of meaning to everyone, with a different meaning to each one. Charming.

XOXO

Ka. Leb.

beautiful...

and fallpessimism lives on, we are all a little bit

more of quite a bit

beautiful. "frayed skyline" is infectiously cute and beautiful, pretty.

* noelle

Beautiful! Thank you for the review BTw.

Very visual in the abstraction. Good work.

I like especially how you used 'frayed'in this.

Short, but incredibly good as always. I feel a sense of freedom in this.

Deliciously sweet. Great mood here, so free and hopeful. I love the phrase 'frayed skyline'.

That is beautiful!

xoxo

short and sweet. nice

It feels like there should be an 'and somewhere before 'fly.' it feels weird otherwise. Quite wonderful, other than that, though.

Oh I am with you there. Short and sweet.