Beautiful. I like your style here. Do you ever wonder how so many cutters get the idea that these feelings, memories, whatever torments us is like poison in our veins? It sounds so similar to the idea of bloodletting that all the old doctors use. Interesting to think about, huh?

Great poem!

I really like the Simile at the beginning of the poem. It works wonderful poem, your descriptions are so real and there is a real sense of emotion in this piece. x

the cutter thing is a bit cliched, but I guess it works for some people. i'd like to see you try something more original though, because you've got lots of promise.

I-LOVED-THIS-POEM. I usually suck at reviewing, so take that as a huge compliment. Keep it up!