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| their wingless angel 2007-08-31 ch 1,  | abuseoh wow, i loved that...it was really good :] |
| xAngel of SorrowX 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. It was really really cool. ^_^ |
| Revinita 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. You've captured this so perfectly that no one could belive you didn't go through this yourself. You are, in short, amazing. |
| gbheart 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseit was a very powerful and emotional story and I loved every minute of it |
| Chaotic0ne 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAh, the rutheless tendencies of the teenage mind... I love how you can sense that the main character cares so deeply for not only her parents but her siblings, although she expresses it with disgust. I also loved the impact of holding back tears. This was a powerful, emotional piece and I loved it. Keep it up. |
| she wants revenge 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseangsty teenaged breakdown is always entertaining. this was a great read. brilliant job. loved it. |
| for what its worth 2006-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse?/ |
| SliversofSilverPain 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuseLike it? It's amazing, I love it. I love how you watch their thought processes unfold in front of your eyes, how it folds in pieces of the past, of what would make them cry.The resolution not to broken, but not wanted to. To try to hold out, to say "I'll be gone next time, it won't happen" but somehow stay.This is amazingly written. *Bows* You are an amazing author |
| a lonely september 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abusei loved this version of an angsty teenage breakdown. you caught the feelings so well, i've had my share of these, and it was very nostalgic reading this, as you wrote it so well. |
| Aquafied 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseteen angsty, yes, but in a way, its more like troubledif that makes any sense, i like this. it is common, but that doesnt mask the brilliant take on it. i had a bad day though, i cant channel my anger so straight |
| Natalie Harker 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseOh. . . I like. Makes my skin crawl. Everyone loves a good angsty-teenage breakdown now and then. |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseAh. This is SO sad. I really hope it's not true. OMG. SO sad. I had tears through out the whole thing you wanna know something? I'm one of those people who "doesn't believe in crying." Amazing job. Just breath taking. |
| angelfelicity 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abusevery good. i felt like i was the character |
| Mr. Shmee 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is good, almost real. I like it. |
| errorlieshere 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abusegod... ...i can't imagine you just imagining this. it's sad that you should understand something like this so well...but it makes for damn good writing, especially from a good writer. |