Sticky, icky jam. I love the varied repetitions - and the stench of jam is overpowering.

(Your profile says like Jacqueline Carey? What did you think of the last 2 books, if you've read them that is...?)

-Anna

Wow, that was certainly unique. I loved your descriptions. I don't think I've ever seen strawberry jam in such a manner

Whoa...deep. Though I think 'kaleidoscopic' sounds odd, and just 'kaleidoscope flavours' would sound a little better.

Great work! ^_^

Nice theme of strawberry jam - its multiple meanings are expressed quite well.

I will look at strawberry jam the same way again.

Yikes! Very memorable, and impressive...what an ending...sort of like the loss of innocence to me...good job! Freaky! Love, mia

deli~ciously eerie. i love the language.

wow death by jam... thats cool

A different take on something so sweet like jam.

wow.. very creepy.. nice repition and cool concept

Intriguing. . . kind of creepy, but beautiful. "Tangy, kaleidoscopic flavors" is probably my favorite part. . . it made my picture a mouth full of rainbow light. . .*shrug*Awesome!

wow its like smthg being so much of a part of you then killing you.. tho i think i completely missed the point of it :S. i like the strawberry jam tho; very nice touch!

and thanks for reviewing my piece, im glad you liked it!! i figured if im having this problem then so must someone else out there :P thanks again ;)

Caramel, beloved, you have one dark mind.

ah, from what i have heard and seen of them, pretty interesting and slightly weirdbut weird is good, in most cases true

i like the abstractness

creepy, but prettypretty. youmakestrawberryjamcreepy.

~* noelle