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Songorita 2009-06-06 . chapter 15
Aw this was a nice story, loved it can't wait to read more. Sadness, I only have one more story to read until I finish reading all your stories. T-T
dappleddakota 2009-05-22 . chapter 8
Just had to say... I loved this:
"Ethan, after 10 hours of labor I won the right to offend you when I deem it necessary."

I definitely laughed.
And yes.. it was out loud. :P

haha. [see? laughter!]
:)
momo3069 2009-02-28 . chapter 15
You are crazy!
How could you ever write stories like this!! I´m hooked on them and it´s not funny. I have my exam in two days and what do I do? I read your stories, because I can´t stop!!
I hope they never end!
I Murder on Impulse 2009-01-20 . chapter 15
great story!

xx
Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-12-16 . chapter 15
hiya

another great story. the 3 sophies in your life must be very special especially seeing as you used the name sophie in your story.

Thanks for writing this great story.

Angel
Banana Bun 2008-11-22 . chapter 15
I enjoyed this story too!
I should read your other ones. You're a good author. :)
Banana Bun 2008-11-21 . chapter 2
I haven't been read any of the Evencort series, but this is very good.
punkproud 2008-08-22 . chapter 15
I loved this story so much
it kinda reminded me of the story His Favorite Mistress by Tracy Anne Warren. but that's good since that one was my favorite from the trilogy, lol

haha, i'm off to read the next one
rockjam 2008-07-22 . chapter 15
It was absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read the last to the series!
Uniquely Proud 2008-06-22 . chapter 15
Awesome! I love this story. Hmm, the Evencort series...all the stories look interesting. Since I read this one, i'm gonna read the others. :)

great story!
feisty sonnet 2008-05-28 . chapter 4
I like your idea, and your story...since it's set in my favorite era and you get inspiration from one of my favorite authors (Julia Quinn).

But of couse, being a fan of such writings, i would like to point out that although sophie and ethan are ten years apart, no one's going to think it outrageous because during that time, it was actually in fashion to marry someone who's more than a decade older...

you said in your profile that you got the names from the bridgerton series, and if you're following her, you might have patterned it her way, because as far as I am aware, the Bridgerton siblings have spouses who are not more than 10 years older or younger than they are...

but if you would broaden your horizon, in other authors' works, the age difference may be more than 10 years and no one's going to take note of it, unless the man is 40 years old and the girl is merely 18...

and another thing, although the story is interesting and very promising in its own way, it would sound more convincing if the language and the way the characters speak is attuned with the era you are trying to portray.

Plus, servants are not allowed to speak or suggest anything to their betters because that is considered disrespectful...like the way Jenny had said to Ethan to greet Sophie because it would be the proper thing to do. Usually, they just stay silent, and just let it spread in the household staff as gossip, but never let the master in on the news.
PrincessNancy 2008-03-25 . chapter 15
Hmm just wanted to point out, if Michael and Lita are 33, then Caitlyn can't be 48 she has to be around 50/51.. because she gave birth to them when she was 17/18.. and Luke would be 58/59..

Just thought you should know..

Anyhow, I always am in love with your stories. :)

XoXo

NAN!
bugsejones1 2007-11-27 . chapter 15
This story was excellent to say the least. I loved every moment of reading it. The ending was just perfect. Even though I would have liked to have a found out the sex of the baby. It gives me a chance to imagine.
LadyLush 2007-10-13 . chapter 15
aw i loved this story so much. even though i usually stay away from stories that aren't really modern i loved this one because it seemed modern kind of lol anyways great story!
x
BrownEyedBeauty 2007-10-11 . chapter 15
Another awesome story. Excellent job, you write very well. I liked this one very much, especially Sophie. She's such a nice character. Keep it up :D
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