Well, as long as you're able to write coherently while drinking, I say go for it! I like the second stanza. 2 of my friends and I always joke around about cyanide, so I appreciate cyanide references. Yeah, we're kinda morbid like that. Keep writing! :)

Whoa... go Nach. I really liked this one; it's gothic, it's morbid and it rhymes! Love it, and no, you don't need anymore to drink. I shudder at what could have been produced after a few more. Cheers!

No, it's not strange, not this one. This one makes sense to me. Perhaps it was on your mind to tell me this, but you did not. Thank you for tell me now.