:cries: that was sad...T.T...very nice story can't wait to read more!

btw, i actually like this story. UPDATE YOU INSANE SMOKER LADY!

I'll be first reviewer cause I'm so kind. Why, oh why did you have to name this Breaking Free. This REALLY hot guy sings a song called Breaking Free. -sighs- he is hot... -drools- moving on before I create something bigger than the Pacific... -cries again- THIS WAS SAD! but besides being sad, it was nicely written. it's not like anything you write is poorly written anyway.