I was looking through the "Just In" section and this was the first decent poem I cam across.

I love the original use of a toy to represent feeling.And I can tell that this hasn't just been sloppily wirtten as it has some great rhythm and rhyming!Great!

awesome! i love the thoughts and emotions you portrayed through the rag doll... it brings it to life ironically. the rythm is magnificent as well. keep it up!

Wow. This has to be one of the most unique poems I've read on this site. Nice rhythm, but not so nice that that's all you're focused on. I'm not a poetry writer, but from what I can tell, this is good.