I'm loving this.

love it =]

especially the last line...

Wow, this is by far one of my most favorite poems on the website. So expressive.

Keep it up! :3

-Ramen

O, very interesting. I love how you used the weather elements throughout the poem. It's really deep especially the lines 'And if I could never breathe again while I'm around you, I would willingly die of suffocation.' The only thing I kinda don't understand is the title. If I were you one thing I would incorrperate it into the poem a little more like adding a line with the word pass or on, but poety is so free that it really doesn't matter. I can't believe that you're just as good poet as a writer. Keep it up.
Meghan- Reviews_Found

the melding of words is like sugar to my lips-- it's so beautiful. good work~ from reviewer's found~ :)

Pretty! Poems are hard to write indeed, and this one turned out quite well. The second line stands out and somewhat irks me, but the rest seems to follow a smooth pace.

For some reason I imagine an Irish man singing this..don't know why, but I do!

I really loved the imagery. How she swims through the fog in the begining, thats just a cool concept. Well I liked this poem very much. and you should continue writing more poems.--Analeigh

Pretty, flowing, and sweet. Good job.

Very nice. I really liked it. Can't think of much else to say today, my brain is working on zero energy.

I like the descriptive, yet conversational quality of it. Your understated words produce more feeling than sentimental cliches.