Reviews for The Cycle Which I Didn't Mean to Write

Asylum Gates 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is beautiful. It reminds me of a dream I had.
And All That Could Have Bee... 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful.
goddessofmoondreams 2006-08-22 ch 1,	abusePowerful imagery-it's disturbing, I like it.
Olusenka 2006-06-24 ch 1,	abuseThe last part is, in my opinion, the most effective segment of this poem. The imagery is gorgeous and I can almost experience the feel of it since you sommunicate it so well. Fantastic metaphors, a really solid piece of effort. Good on you for posting.
Phoenix Down 2006-03-09 ch 1,	abuseeven if you regret posting this, I'm glad you did-- because this is probebly the best piece of poetry I've ever read at Fictionpress. It was a poem with siginificance. It was strung together well, with meaning and imagery. I really do, absolutely, find beauty in this. Thank you.