 ShadowPharoh 2006-04-09 . chapter 1lovely. thats the only word i can use to describe this. simply: lovely. |
 q is for quirks 2006-03-29 . chapter 1good comparisons in this and good job tying it into reality. nice poem all in all. |
 Too Forgetful 2006-03-26 . chapter 1 nice one. dang, you're actually better than me. haha. |
 les petits bateaux 2006-03-10 . chapter 1Good work. I love your imagery and the descriptions were just amazing. |
 aliasfan 2006-03-09 . chapter 1Great poem! I love the analogy of the rose and love. ::adds to fav authors:: |