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| Tatsu-Dreamer 2007-04-09 ch 5,  | abusegraphic, the only other view i am curious about is a hunter's. What is their job? Very creepy, and detailed. I kinda wish there was a full story about each character |
| Autumnymph 2006-06-05 ch 5, | abuseWow, good God. I like it. Now I'm convinced that I should really create pasts/identities for my characters in great detail. |
| Shadow Gryphon 2006-03-26 ch 5, | abuseThis was a bloody cool series. I think I liked the last one best, but that would be because I wrote one similar to it a while ago. Another story would be great, though. *hopeful* |
| Drizit 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuseWow. I felt like everything was going to connect somehow. And it ended like that!? you're one bad **. So come on! Write another story connecting the whole damn thing! It was a very good story?stories! |
| LancerDragoon 2006-03-10 ch 3, | abuseHomeless people are everywhere in this story... Anyway, this is good too. But again, I have to say that I wish it would be more fleshed upon... more, more, MORE! You know? |
| LancerDragoon 2006-03-10 ch 2, | abuseKYLE! ...wait, this wasn't the other Kyle. Crap. Anyhow, this is better than the last chapter. Probably because I already know the character from before (by the way, real smooth there xD) and probably because you like werewolves much better anyway. |
| LancerDragoon 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. Less detail, less atmosphere but nice, nonetheless. Wish it had more flesh to it, though. |
| W3DNESDAY 2006-03-09 ch 3, | abusei can't wait to read the next chapter. update! |
| W3DNESDAY 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abusewow, nicely written. i love the small details in the beginning that make the story believable..the drunk husband, the arabic hot dog vendor. the ending was perfect. and the twist would have been excellent too if i hadn't read the title. you really did a good job of making the lawyer seem like a nice, normal guy. maybe you should consider changing the title so that the twist has more punch? i loved your story anyway. amazing |
| evilangel2005us 2006-03-09 ch 3, | abuseUnique. Descriptive. Short, but I like it anyways. |