All I can say is that I wish I said your words to my problem weeks ago, because there's still a lot of hatred on my mind and it's turning into guilt. How DOES that work...?

Anywho, amazing job. I give you kudos! :]

Powerful, always your stuff so powerful.

Interesting, almost contradictory nature of the first stanza, especially the first and last lines of it. As though you can't be bothered to speak your hate, and yet can't stop yourself. You don't care enough to say "I hate you", and yet climb mountains, etc, to gesture. Interesting. Says something about human nature.

Matt

wow.. love the format and the ending

i am in entranced openmouthed AWE of the last two orgasmic shell-like atrophied lines. they are perfection personified, & they live at the end of my bed.

wow, this is like a whiplash. Wonderful powerful spitting words, such a luscious image. Love it.

Favorite line: "And '**off' runs through my veins." Hehehe. Who can't relate to that? Some people just make you want to scream. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

wow...this is just one big mesh of beautiful powerful caotic emotions...all laid out so vividly. wicked; love it. so much attitude its just delicious.

I love the length you go to describing this... and sometimes silence says it all..

Beautiful.