I really like this. Youth sunday at my church is this sunday, and I have to read a poem on freedom, and I have to find the poem. Would you mind if I read this Sunday morning?

Very good. It's very true, and sometimes I think we take it for granted... Keep writing your poems, cause you're good at it.

That is so true! I love this.

I should really review all of the gazijillions! of poems you have! (Gazijillions? that a word?), because you've incredibly upped how good I look by leaving no poem unreviewed! ^^ I *heart* u! Gazijillions, I tell you! Gazijillions! ^^ Now to get back on topic... ^^ good poem. You're right, His love for us is no laughing matter, rather, we should appreciate it and give/serve back. Good job! ~Pyra (P.S.: Yuudachi is UP!^^ so shameless am I...)

I'm not a Christian myself, but I like how your writing shows your god's passion. Nice bit of writing.

Amen! I agree. Beautiful write. Keep'em coming. God Bless ya and thank you for the kind review.

Amen! Keep writing!

~Anna~