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| Dragonzz 2006-03-10 ch 1,   | WOw! Great job. I love the last line. Awesome ~dragonzz~ |
| callmebelle 2006-03-09 ch 1, | I love this, especially the last line. The way you allude to drowning in lies throughout the whole poem is amazing, and then talking about how the trust died sums it up beautifully. Truly great job! |