I like it.

Great story, hoping that you will update again!

Great story! please continue with it coz i wanna know what happens next, lol

i'm dying for an update. don't stop now!! i really want to see how this all pans out.eagerly awaiting chapter 4...~stranger with your doorkey

High school, I'm going to be a freshman this year. And I'm really and very nervous. Great work on this chapter as well. Ada is reminding me of my friends. You better update soon! I'll give you cookies and milk!! lol I'm going a little overbroad. But please update soon. Keep up the good writing. Till next time

waterhealer

I wish I could write long stories like you. I can't help but praise you. At least this writing is better than mine. Though you could have spilt some of the huge paragraphs in two. You are a very good writer. Nice work.

waterhealer

You an african-american, and yet you love manga. I think I just met a friends.I haven't met people who are black and love all the things you love. It's nice that you reviewed me. If not I might haven't known you existed. Oh by the way thanks for the review. You know for SoN. And oh yeah, nice work so far. The name Ada is very pretty. Keep up the great work. Till next tiime

waterhealer

IS THIS ADA/CIARAN OR ADA/KYEL?

aw, i love it!

yea, you actually took too long of a time getting the next chapter up. i completely forgot what story this is, when i saw the title, and even after reaing this chapter. but i did remember after rereading the first chapter.

anyways, well, this was a good chapter. im sorry i cant say much else, because i really have to go, now. someone else needs to use the computer. but update soon!!

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

I like your characters. This is going to be an interesting couple. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm all excited for no reason. ^.~ ~Ana~

yupp yupp yupp. i enjoyed the chapter. nd if you dont update around mid next week, ill be upset. you can expect that.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

WOW.

I've only read chapter one... but this is fantastic!

Keep it up!

wow, you really did an awesome job here, describing everything. and i mean everything. i really do like stories that are ejoyable to read, but at the same time have a really good and clear message hidden deep. this is one of them, and im more than eager to read the next chapter. so please update soon!! by the way, youre on my alerts list. :)

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

hey i really like this story already, but I think I'm obligated to tell you that your story isn't taking anon. reviews so you might want to change that, b/c you're really missing out on a lot of reviews! but anyway I'm also happy you'll update regularly b/c Im sick of authors who NEVER update *hint, hint... finish the behind our eyes story cuz I liked it!* lol