I think that was pretty good exept I didn't like how it finished. I think maybe you should have left them live a week longer and die of some unknown disease or something,but besides that it was pretty good. :) Keep on practicing on endings. Love, Elisabeth

kl are u going to write more and never heard of this story so well done. I really liked this story so please write more or another one

If it makes you feel better, I never even heard of the book and I work in a library. I just decided I was sick and tired of Disney screwing around with stories and not doing the movie versions litterally correctly. (IE: Hunchback Of Notre Dame.)

This sounds a TON like a book I've already read called beauty. A TON. I'm kinda of worried. THe statue part was cool, but it had too much resemblence to something I've read already.