This is a very well written story. I'm going to start off with that, because I enjoyed this story. It was a good read, something that's hard to find now a days unless you look in the right places.

I have to say that I have been reading your writings before and they are all very well done, better than I can do. I read your 'I am not a writer' and found it very interesting.

Even if you are not a writer, which is alright, you should continue it. You are very good at it. I can place a bet that you are good at singing as well, even though I've never heard you before. Just keep doing this, maybe one day something good will come out of it.

Again, this was very well done and I look forward to reading your next piece.

Until then,

Michi