Nice! that's all I can think of for now...

This poem was alright but it could use a little more symbolism and surprise if you know what i mean.

Hay! oh as for mistakes, you need to add an extra o on too in the line we have grown to far apart. other than that i just need you to add me to your fav stories

great work. thanks for checking out my stuff. I feel like no one does lol cause i never get any reviews