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Reviews For: I'm Alive Only to Feel

Chaos Apple
2006-03-11
ch 1,
Deep and dark and dreary. (alliteration at it's best!)

I just love this piece; it's so beautiful and haunting. I'm not sure I see the full image you've tried to paint for us, but that could just be my limited vision. I can't really understand the message, but maybe I'm partially deaf.

Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading more in the future.
Princess-anna57
2006-03-09
ch 1,
Wow, excellent poem. I adore this! Good work. Keep writing!

~Anna~
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