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| Chaos Apple 2006-03-11 ch 1, | Deep and dark and dreary. (alliteration at it's best!) I just love this piece; it's so beautiful and haunting. I'm not sure I see the full image you've tried to paint for us, but that could just be my limited vision. I can't really understand the message, but maybe I'm partially deaf. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading more in the future. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-09 ch 1, | Wow, excellent poem. I adore this! Good work. Keep writing! ~Anna~ |