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| AuraBorealis 2007-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseoh. keep writing. this has such a promising start. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| thx4allthefish 2007-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice... I like it... You do have some spelling mistakes, but overall it was good |
| ilikemykitty 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThe ending amused me a bit, though, I have to say I did sort of see it coming. Not that there's a problem with that, though! I would like to see this continue, I'm very interested in seeing more interaction between these two characters. |
| M.R.Sanner 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuselmao , nice . I like ^ ^. Please update soon !! Oh , I have the new chapter of f,w&k up ^ ^. |
| Kayla Christine 2006-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abusehi! THis is very good, I like how you kept it in the right tense the whole time, not an easy feat! Thanks for the review on Talia, I'll be sure to update you when I update! |
| someone 2006-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was predictable, but a really good set-up. |
| les petits bateaux 2006-06-15 ch 1, | abusevery cute. it reminds me of those movies where the enemies end up as lovers. wonder how they're going to end up getting married. :) -trinity |
| multiples of six 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. It made me giggle.. especially the last part. Nicely done ;) |
| bagle-worm 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha, cute. Solidly written, maybe a /little/ elementary, but hey, no biggie. I Like the very last line. -grin- |
| Firespirit44 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting and unusual story...I've never heard of the saying before though. O.o Maybe I should go try it..xD By the way, thanks for reviewing on my songfic "Invisible Man"..Glad you liked it. |