lovely piece again...I liked the part about the alpha particles and the 'modern day masterpiece of your mind'. The whole mood and meaning of the piece is really interesting. I like I believe it. Anyway I like this a lot.

This is just really really good.

no, i havent heard it. absolutely DYING to. me hearts pj. and this was a great poem. im glad you updated.

I liked that a lot. The alliteration really made it come together.