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| Shadowhound 2006-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseNot a bad story. No real complaints against it, though the ending seemed a little cheesy. About your lack of reviews. Considering the fact that you haven't updated anything in more than five months, this probably falls on deaf ears. The reason that you didn't recieve enough reviews to motivate you to continue posting was that you might not have reviewed enough works by other people. Anyway, good luck with getting published. If you succeed, e-mail me the title and I'll check it out. Shadowhound |