reminds me of my dad. he died a long time ago, though.

i think you really captured the spirit of the moment.

wonderful job.

Quoth the Tinman: "Now I know I have a heart, because it's broken."

Something like that.This was so unimagingably sad. You really did break my heart and right now I am in tears. It was really good, great description and stuff. But so, so sad...amazing poem.

condolences...seriously, i dunno what to say. i mean, we talked 'bout this already. hehe...

you really captured the memories and sadness of this poem. my nana died when i was eight and i never truly got over it. i sympathize deeply for your loss.

That gave me shivers :( My gramma died a few years ago and I remember how sad I was for a long time. I think you captured the feeling very well in this poem. Really good poem. I'm sorry for your loss.

Keep writing

~Rhia

This was so poignant! My eyes are watering right now...simply beautiful. Much related, don't you think?

I'm sorry for your loss. This poem is very, very touching. Thank you for sharing! Keep writing!

~Anna~